Dongje. A few things on this post. You said, "She has two different way to prove dat." You should say, "The man in the conversation offers her two solutions to her problem." What is she trying to PROVE? Nothing! So, don't use that word. Also, your pronunciation on the word, "THAT" sounds like "DAT" Another problem was you said, "One is quit the job and other is say to more money." This has a handful of problems as well. Instead, you should say, " One SOLUTION THE MAN GIVES IS TO quit HER job and THE other is TO ASK HER BOSS FOR more money (My corrections are in CAPS).
Lastly, You said, "You should be replaced when you say that you want more money." But you should say, "You COULD be replaced IF you say that you want more money."
Pay attention to what you say, You're TOEFL score depends on it!
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Dongje. A few things on this post.
You said, "She has two different way to prove dat." You should say, "The man in the conversation offers her two solutions to her problem." What is she trying to PROVE? Nothing! So, don't use that word. Also, your pronunciation on the word, "THAT" sounds like "DAT"
Another problem was you said, "One is quit the job and other is say to more money." This has a handful of problems as well. Instead, you should say, " One SOLUTION THE MAN GIVES IS TO quit HER job and THE other is TO ASK HER BOSS FOR more money (My corrections are in CAPS).
Lastly, You said, "You should be replaced when you say that you want more money." But you should say, "You COULD be replaced IF you say that you want more money."
Pay attention to what you say, You're TOEFL score depends on it!
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